Further sequence development

Untitled from Joanne Catlow on Vimeo.

Although only a few changes have been made every little helps making it as I first imagined.  I have simple changed the position of the type and altered where the lights shine.  I can't ever believe how long it takes to do the smallest thing.

After thinking more about it I think it would definitely look a lot better without the lights on it so the original colours are there instead of artificial ones.