Amended final sequence

I have added screen shots of the amendments I have made to the final sequence and included the final sequence at the bottom. (screen shots in reverse order of play)

the final title needed to be more wholesome and needed to flow better. Although the timing was difficult to manage as there was just 10 seconds remaining I feel this does work well and all the words are read apropriately.

Similarly I have added Type throughout so that the audience are not constantly waiting for another word instead there is more of a flow from one scene to the next.

With this I have tried to keep it as simple as possible and just enough showing for the word to notice and read.

Untitled from Joanne Catlow on Vimeo.